“And then….”

I was just revisiting this essential advice from Trey Parker and Matt Stone.

Good Stuff. My favorite bit is the part referenced in the title. You can’t be reminded of it too much when plotting. Aim for but’s and therefore’s at the end of scenes, not “and then’s.”

One Comment

  1. Posted August 8, 2012 at 1:58 pm | Permalink

    Whooaa! I’ve got a lot of figuratively “and,thens” in my little pb. I’ve got some revisions, uugh and yaaay! Thanks for posting this. Greatly appreciated.

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